My apologies and condolences.

My apologies and condolences first;
to all who've had and lost me in their lives,
yours a feeling is what life gives,
getting and losing so fast 
for a soul so fragile like wild eggs,
humdrummed to resignation, tenderness it oft° begs.

My condolences and apologies first:
I'm sorry if I never said goodbye,
I'm sorry if you were accustomed to me standing by,
I'm sorry if to limbo your thoughts have been cast-
my condolences, at your whims I've oft° died
thence, to nature I must abide.

Weigh not much on your outcast soul;
free your mind for tomorrow's long trek.
Give the scars a jolly smile,from slavery you'll break,
for I lost myself too in this play so foul.
So, jot my spirit an apology and a note of condolence,
misery won't inter me more in a cruel embrace.

© Bunguswa Brian™
2021

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  1. Wow.what a way to say goodbye.

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  2. Beautiful, sad and true. Your ability to mix different generations of the English language and be a poet while at it, wows me.

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  3. They lost me but I found myself๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. I see a very creative mind here,good job

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  5. Love your work✨

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    1. Thank you for reading ๐Ÿ™ I'm humbled.

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  6. Always a charmer with words.

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  7. Wow! This really amazing, I love it....Way to say goodbye. I love the content, that creativity. You are going far. Let God bless the work of your hands ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
    ...keep it up

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    1. A big amen. Thank you for sparing your time to read. Won't disappoint you in content.
      I'm humbled๐Ÿ™

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    1. I'm really humbled. Thank you for reading ๐Ÿ™

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  9. Wow, this amazing. Best way of saying goodbye to loved ๐Ÿ˜ ones

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    1. Thank you senior for reading. I'm humbled for your time. I won't disappoint

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    1. Thank you for sparing your time to read. I'm humbled.

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    2. Keep it sir u will go far

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    3. I'm humbled. Thank you for reading.

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  11. It's very impressive...keep it up!

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    1. Thank you for reading. Continue being part of my audience.

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  12. Wow I like the choice of words boss keep it up

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    1. Thank you so much for sparing your time to read.

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  13. Wow,,,it's amazing...keep it up!

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    1. Thanks a lot for reading. Keep in touch for more amazing pieces.

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    1. Thank you @ann for giving me audience. I'm humbled ๐Ÿ™

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  15. Great,kindly publish the poems in a book

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    1. Thank you. I'm working on it. Once I get an avenue I can manage I'll have them published.

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  16. Go Brian.. this is a good piece

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  17. Wooow! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    It's so real. A nice way to say goodbye.

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  18. ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ

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    1. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ thank you for reading ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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  19. This is amzing

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  20. Ngoja nitafute dictionary narudi ku comment

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  21. This is the feeling I've wishes to express

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  22. A nice piece comrade. Krep it up

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  23. the choice of words in on another level. you have a special way with your words. you strike differently. keep inking....

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  24. A beautified goodbye nice one

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  25. We keep losing them until we find ourselves again..

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  26. what an epic piece

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  27. A very creative mind prof

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  28. Creativity at its finest ๐Ÿค—

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