My apologies and condolences.
My apologies and condolences first;
to all who've had and lost me in their lives,
yours a feeling is what life gives,
getting and losing so fast
for a soul so fragile like wild eggs,
humdrummed to resignation, tenderness it oft° begs.
My condolences and apologies first:
I'm sorry if I never said goodbye,
I'm sorry if you were accustomed to me standing by,
I'm sorry if to limbo your thoughts have been cast-
my condolences, at your whims I've oft° died
thence, to nature I must abide.
Weigh not much on your outcast soul;
free your mind for tomorrow's long trek.
Give the scars a jolly smile,from slavery you'll break,
for I lost myself too in this play so foul.
So, jot my spirit an apology and a note of condolence,
misery won't inter me more in a cruel embrace.
© Bunguswa Brian™
2021
Wow.what a way to say goodbye.
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